I mentioned I had a few people beta read for me. One of my readers (and thank you to all of you) mentioned that it seemed like what I wrote for Chapter 1 should really be Chapter 3 and that parts of it were probably Chapter 2.  From their comments, they made alot of sense and I really do need to start out the story showing more of her character as a base line for life is normally like for her. I can even make it work so that Chapter 2 is plausible and Chapter 3 is even more believable because of the events of 1 and 2. Confused yet? LOL

So…that’s what my next TO DO is. Figure out how to start Chapter 1 in a way that gets you all right into the action. Come up with a killer hook line for the first sentence and get you all deeply involved in wanting to see what comes next from the action in Chapter 1.

I’ll be heading to hide my head under the covers for a while. *just teasing*

P.S. My net connection went down last night so Episode 14 and 15 – Part 1 and 2 of my Interview with Chris Lester of Metamor City will be up in a few hours. Right now there’s Tuscani pasta from Pizza Hut calling my name.