Well it looks like I have my job cut out for me. I never do anything the easy way. LOL<\/p>\n
I mentioned I had a few people beta read for me. One of my readers (and thank you to all of you) mentioned that it seemed like what I wrote for Chapter 1 should really be Chapter 3 and that parts of it were probably Chapter 2.\u00c2\u00a0 From their comments, they made alot of sense and I really do need to start out the story showing more of her character as a base line for life is normally like for her. I can even make it work so that Chapter 2 is plausible and Chapter 3 is even more believable because of the events of 1 and 2. Confused yet? LOL<\/p>\n
So…that’s what my next TO DO is. Figure out how to start Chapter 1 in a way that gets you all right into the action. Come up with a killer hook line for the first sentence and get you all deeply involved in wanting to see what comes next from the action in Chapter 1.<\/p>\n
I’ll be heading to hide my head under the covers for a while. \ud83d\ude1b *just teasing*<\/p>\n
P.S. My net connection went down last night so Episode 14 and 15 – Part 1 and 2 of my Interview with Chris Lester of Metamor City will be up in a few hours. Right now there’s Tuscani pasta from Pizza Hut calling my name.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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